Nerdery enclosed
Jun. 30th, 2011 12:26 amThis is a changeling story. It's Elisabeth's escape. I'm... reasonably happy with it, though it was written in two parts and I feel an urge to edit it and try and make the style slightly more consistant. I'm also not sure about the ending, because it isn't really one. I can't see where to put the endpoint to this story, but I'm sure the level of detail it's at right here is inappropriate for the scenes that follow. After all, the psychology that leads to the break is important. The detail of the first moments of the break is important. The maze of twisty passages, all alike is not so much.
Mind you, I haven't got in an important psych moment where she looks at her injury, and sees what marked ice flesh looks like. That needs to go in somewhere. I suppose it could be a followup.
( Caged. )
Mind you, I haven't got in an important psych moment where she looks at her injury, and sees what marked ice flesh looks like. That needs to go in somewhere. I suppose it could be a followup.
( Caged. )